Why Characters with No Heart Rot into Dead Stories

Have you ever noticed that some characters in fantasy stories feel more alive and relatable than others? 

 

A common pitfall is writing characters as archetypes—like the badass warrior—who perform predictable actions. Instead, I focus on their motivations. For example, consider a warrior who was once pampered and weak, leading to the death of a family member.  

 

Now, driven by guilt, the warrior strives to prove himself worthy through absolute obedience and martial perfection. This motivation drives their actions–both good and bad— making them more complex and relatable. 

 

Isn’t that a more interesting character than someone who kicks butt because he was “born that way” and just likes kicking butt? 

 

I put what I’ve learned about creating compelling characters into my new series, ‘Brotherhood of the Wolf.’ These insights have transformed my writing, and I believe they can enhance your reading experience too. You’ll definitely see it on display when “The Lesser Evil” comes out later this summer, inshaAllah. 

 

In “The Lesser Evil,” it’s a high honor to have your son chosen to join the ruling elite of the City of the Angel. Yet, fear—not pride—lances through Polychronia’s heart when she receives the letter asking for her boy, Koja, by name.  

 

She knows what the lords and ladies of the high court really are….. 

 

Bloodthirsty undead, obsessed with physical perfection.  

 

She loves her son too much to let him become a monster– even if she has to become one to save him.  

 

This story explores the dark and terrible world Koja lives in and the bridge between harm and love. 

 

It’s intense stuff… 

 

Anyway, a few days ago, I was interviewed by Barney Smith of StoryComic where you can get a sneak peek into some of my character development process. These insights will surprise you. 

 

Are you passionate about fantasy stories and love diving deep into character development? Then you should watch the interview here. 

 

All the best, 

 

Wes 

 

P.S. Reflecting on these questions has been a game-changer for my characters. Next time you read a fantasy story–or any type of fiction–try to identify the motivations driving your favorite characters. It adds a whole new layer of enjoyment to the experience (assuming the characters are written well, of course). 

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